Your content is very organized, and you do a great job in detailing your source content in relation to your topic. I also appreciate the simplification of your information which helped in keeping me on track with your research. Right away you introduced your topic with a background story which is a great lead to attract me to your research.
I only wished that your voice was a little more active throughout your presentation which would have helped in maintaining the attention of your audience.
Tierra Thomas 
Tierra,
Your content is very organized, and you do a great job in detailing your source content in relation to your topic. I also appreciate the simplification of your information which helped in keeping me on track with your research. Right away you introduced your topic with a background story which is a great lead to attract me to your research.
I only wished that your voice was a little more active throughout your presentation which would have helped in maintaining the attention of your audience.
But overall, nice work!
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